Talk:Two men arrested in Tennessee for plot to kill Obama and school children

Review

Revision 716430 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 05:06, 28 October 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: The article itself is short, thus the 2 quotes take up a significant chunk of it. Also, these 2 quotes are unattributed to the media sources they supposedly came from. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: I am sure there are more sources reporting on this than just those 2, would be nice to get some additional information from other sources on this. NPOV: Not ready: Any comment on this situation from anyone other than just BATF? Either of the campaigns, media impressions, etc? Style: Not ready: As stated above, a bit brief, could use expansion from other sources. Comments by reviewer: Cirt (talk) 05:06, 28 October 2008 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 716430 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 05:06, 28 October 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: The article itself is short, thus the 2 quotes take up a significant chunk of it. Also, these 2 quotes are unattributed to the media sources they supposedly came from. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: I am sure there are more sources reporting on this than just those 2, would be nice to get some additional information from other sources on this. NPOV: Not ready: Any comment on this situation from anyone other than just BATF? Either of the campaigns, media impressions, etc? Style: Not ready: As stated above, a bit brief, could use expansion from other sources. Comments by reviewer: Cirt (talk) 05:06, 28 October 2008 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Rescue

I made an attempt at saving this article through a major rewrite using more sources. I put it up for a new review. Cheers, --SVTCobra 00:55, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Thank you, sorry, I've been busy and did not have nearly enough time to put more work into it. --Poisonous (talk) 05:03, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

2nd review

Revision 716892 of this article has been reviewed by PatrickFlaherty (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:50, 29 October 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Improved and well done The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 716892 of this article has been reviewed by PatrickFlaherty (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:50, 29 October 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Improved and well done The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.