Talk:Swine flu patients taken to Kenyan capital to fly home to UK Sunday

Cannot verify

The paragraph beginning ...There has been considerable confusion... the items about the changes in the health care system are not in the two sources given. As well, the items in the paragraph ...The WHO, which collects data likewise are not at all mentioned in the two sources given.

This first part of a sentence is confirmed in the articles... "The government's swift response to contain the disease has been impressive despite attempts by government officials ", however the last part "to cover up the real magnitude of the situation." does not seem to be reflected in the articles. "The clandestine Police operation", seems to refer to the police avoidance of the press, and no comment reflecting on the situaton's magnitude. Can more sources be added, or paragraphs rephrased to reflect sources provided? The rest of the article does contain and remain focused on the facts from the articles mentioned. Kind Regards SriMesh | talk 02:52, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

I removed paragraphs which I could not verify, and re-worded facts for a couple of new sources which have been added to the article. This way I can verify what is left in the article. If more sources can be found for removed content, it can be re-added.SriMesh | talk 03:27, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

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Revision 12345 of this article has been reviewed by SriMesh (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:33, 6 July 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: --SriMesh The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Correction

{{editprotected}} The students, who have completed their courses of Tamiflu, are expected to fly... (commas)Tyrol5 (talk) 15:44, 6 July 2010 (UTC)

Done C628 (talk) 15:52, 6 July 2010 (UTC)