Talk:Sri Lankan president promises to end war in 48 hours

International concerns

Could a little blurb be added about the "international concern over the tens of thousands of civilians under threat from the heavy artillery bombardments" CBC or or "Sri Lankan President Mahinda Rajapaksa is under great international pressure" FOX Such is also in the original two news stories. Adding one more blurb about this aspect would include all major aspects from the news wires, and give a more substantiated source to support AP with more than just PTI. Everything else seems to conform to the peer review.SriMesh | talk 00:51, 16 May 2009 (UTC)

Done I've added some relevant information. Could you take another look at the article? Thanks. Tempodivalse [talk] 01:22, 16 May 2009 (UTC)

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