Talk:South African lawyer and anti-apartheid leader Harry Schwarz dies age 85
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Revision 952257 of this article has been reviewed by Microchip08 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:34, 5 February 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: This reads like a Wikipedia article, not a Wikinews article. Please fix this by expanding on the event at hand and removing some of the wikilinks, then re-submit this for review. Thank you. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Review of revision 952275 [Passed]
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Revision 952275 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:44, 5 February 2010 (UTC).
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Revision 952275 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:44, 5 February 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |