Talk:South African TV journalist mugged while preparing for live broadcast

Review of revision 3308141 [Passed]

Revision 3308141 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:56, 13 March 2015 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Skirting close to this becoming stale....but I think it slips in OK. I took a little more liberty in tightening up on terse wording for para 2 than I normally like to as a reviewer, but I don't think I crossed the line too badly. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 3308141 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:56, 13 March 2015 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Skirting close to this becoming stale....but I think it slips in OK. I took a little more liberty in tightening up on terse wording for para 2 than I normally like to as a reviewer, but I don't think I crossed the line too badly. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.