Talk:Six killed and hundreds injured in Bahrain
Review of revision 1195823 [Failed]
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edit"6 killed, 1000 injured after Saudi invasion of Bahrain" is not neutral. Although, I can't come up with anything to replace it. --Patrick M (TUFKAAP) (talk) 14:33, 16 March 2011 (UTC)
- "Six killed and hundreds injured in Bahrain" is it fine? --Wayiran (talk) 14:48, 16 March 2011 (UTC)
Review of revision 1196292 [Passed]
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Revision 1196292 of this article has been reviewed by C628 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:48, 16 March 2011 (UTC).
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Revision 1196292 of this article has been reviewed by C628 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:48, 16 March 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Looks good to me. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |