Talk:Ship fire kills nine Greek and Filipino sailors in Caribbean Sea
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Revision 928002 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:09, 26 December 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Good choice of sources but, once read I'm still not really clear on how many taken off (dead or alive), if they're all "deemed rescued" as in supported to get the ship to land, or all evacuated as a rescue and venezuelan navy people bringing it in. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 928002 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:09, 26 December 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Good choice of sources but, once read I'm still not really clear on how many taken off (dead or alive), if they're all "deemed rescued" as in supported to get the ship to land, or all evacuated as a rescue and venezuelan navy people bringing it in. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Looks like something of a halfway house. Five wounded were 'rescued' (I'd say a rescue involves taking all folk off, so I didn't repeat the word). Nine more are dead to make fourteen. The ten that were uninjured remain on the ship as it is towed away, bringing us to the full 24. I don't know why their still on the ship; would make sense to take them off to grieve their friends and put navy sailors in a fit state to command a crippled vessel on to guide it while its towed. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 15:43, 26 December 2009 (UTC)