Talk:Several injured in suicide bomb blast near police lane, Islamabad

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Anonymous101 in topic Review 3

I donot think it cause copyrights problemsregarding this article, check back again, and then publish it, whereas Style Issue, can u suggest me , what u feel wrong in it's style? Azamishaque (talk) 23:58, 9 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

The article needs work and is not ready for publishing. Fixing it up a bit. --Poisonous (talk) 08:28, 10 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

I donot understand what more you are expecting in it? All the facts and figures are pointed out,with all the refrences, Might be you are talking about some grammer mistake!! Help in this else it is ready to publish or make it correct and then Publish it will honour your suggestions Azamishaque (talk) 15:17, 10 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

Sorry, I should have explained. The grammar was a bit bad and it had some information in there that was not needed, while other information was not included. There was a slight NPOV problem, and unneeded sources. I fixed them and it's awaiting a review. :) --Poisonous (talk) 17:45, 10 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

Review edit

Ok i m waiting too Azamishaque (talk) 04:53, 11 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

Ehm, I double checked, I used Find, could not find that in the article... --Poisonous (talk) 06:07, 11 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

What are you looking for? what you want to find? Azamishaque (talk) 10:37, 11 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

I went and saw that the copyvio sentence wasn't even in there, I believe I had changed it a while ago when I first edited it, I strangled Anon a bit so there :P --Poisonous (talk) 18:48, 11 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

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I'm not filling in the whole template as I have found a copyright issue:

"said the bomber had parked the vehicle outside the three-storey ATC building and walked inside and gave a box of sweets to Muharar Tahir, who was stated to be his friend." - copyvio of http://www.dawn.com/2008/10/10/top2.htm

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