Talk:Rubens Barrichello wins 2009 Italian Grand Prix

Review of revision 882427 [Passed]

Revision 882427 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:03, 15 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I have done *smoe* copyedit on this, particularly the abusive over-wikification. You don't need to wikilink Ferrari, among other things. And you should never link to other wikinews stories in the body of your article text. This is Wikinews is not Wikipedia stuff. We're not a jumping-off point, related stories go in related news so people read the current article and can then step back in time a bit. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 882427 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:03, 15 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I have done *smoe* copyedit on this, particularly the abusive over-wikification. You don't need to wikilink Ferrari, among other things. And you should never link to other wikinews stories in the body of your article text. This is Wikinews is not Wikipedia stuff. We're not a jumping-off point, related stories go in related news so people read the current article and can then step back in time a bit. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.