Talk:Royal wedding delayed as Prince plans for Pope's funeral
Nice cleanup, EdB... --HiFlyer 21:15, 4 Apr 2005 (UTC) First para now has too many sentences and sounds staccato. I like more 'flow' in paras, if you know what I mean. So I will change that.
Other than that I like your changes to active voice, etc. --HiFlyer 21:38, 4 Apr 2005 (UTC)
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