Talk:Quad crash kills fourteen year-old in County Londonderry, Northern Ireland
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Blood Red Sandman in topic Review of revision 914672 [Passed]
Review of revision 914672 [Passed]
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Revision 914672 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:57, 21 November 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: First sentence of para 2 is slightly awakward. Maybe switch the comma for a full stop? The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 914672 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:57, 21 November 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: First sentence of para 2 is slightly awakward. Maybe switch the comma for a full stop? The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |