Talk:Porsche automaker's global sales drop 28%

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Jcart1534 in topic Review

Clarification edit

I would try to fix this sentence, but I am not sure what the intent is: "The decrease in revenues was not as heavy than that of sales due to the company's 911 model, which had accounted for a larger part of sales, resulting in a better mix of models." --Jcart1534 (talk) 22:03, 19 June 2009 (UTC)Reply

I removed that last bit, does it make more sense now? (The awkward wording was partly because i was trying not to infringe copyright with WSJ and i couldn't find another good way to phrase that sentence.) Tempodivalse [talk] 22:06, 19 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
I made a minor edit. If I misunderstood the intent, please revert. Cheers, --Jcart1534 (talk) 22:14, 19 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
Yes, that's much better, thanks. Tempodivalse [talk] 22:17, 19 June 2009 (UTC)Reply

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