Talk:Police identify man's body found in a canal in Miami Gardens, Florida

Michael???

Hi, I usually don't want to ask for help but if you could take a look at the story on Miami gardens and any pointers would be great also! Thanks again, @Michael.C.Wright BigKrow (talk) 23:00, 14 May 2024 (UTC)

I made a few changes and tried not to break things too badly. I think the title is a bit unwieldy. It could be as simple as "Police identify a man's body found in Miami Gardens, Florida." According to its web page, Miami Gardens is a city separate from Miami,[1] though it is located within the Miami metro area. I think the title may be more clear without mentioning it is "in Miami, Florida." I changed the lede to remove "in Miami, Florida." Neither source article describes Miami Gardens as in Miami. But both stories were reported from Miami, so it could be confusing. Michael.C.Wright (^Talk/_Published) 00:05, 15 May 2024 (UTC)

Thank you for your help, @Michael.C.Wright BigKrow (talk) 01:53, 15 May 2024 (UTC)

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Thank you. BigKrow (talk) 15:15, 20 May 2024 (UTC)