Talk:Peter Forsberg scores two in win over the Boston Bruins

Latest comment: 18 years ago by CitizenBruce

Very poor article. What is a "hat trick"? What sport is being played? The writer seems to have no awareness that he or she is addressing an international audience who may not necessarily share the same interests. --CitizenBruce 20:27, 25 November 2005 (UTC)Reply

Okay - point taken. This is my first try at an article out here. I'll see what I can do to dress it up. Thanks for the feed back. --brentmid 21:57, 25 November 2005 (UTC)Reply

There's some useful links (usually) posted on your talk page. You can also look at other articles and see how wiki code can give you entries to Wikipedia on things like people and subjects. Of course, writing for an international audience complicates things. I know what a "hat trick" is, but as has been pointed out not everyone does. Try to put together a paragraph that uses the term and both explains it by ennumerating each point scored, or referring to scoring three times. Brian McNeil / talk 22:13, 25 November 2005 (UTC)Reply
Much better now :) The article though still leaves me with the feeling of: "Who is Peter Forsberg and why should I care?". Still, this can perhaps partly be attributed by non-inclination toward sport news. Cheers. --CitizenBruce 22:54, 25 November 2005 (UTC)Reply
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