Talk:Pennsylvania court sentences child porn priest to eight years in prison

Review of revision 1758817 [Not ready]

Revision 1758817 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:08, 3 January 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Some of the wording is to close to the way it was written in the sources i.e. "engaging in sexual activity" and "left the image on his computer". I was also concerned about how close some extracts in this article were to the original sources, for example "Bartley Sorensen, a 63-year-old former Roman Catholic priest", "who had been trained on how to identify predators" and "he wanted to be caught". Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Although the York Daily Record reported the judge noting one sadomasochistic image, the sources never reported the judge saying "some of the images contained sadomasochistic elements". Also, saying "5,000 downloaded images of young boys" suggests all the images were of young boys, which was never really confirmed by the sources. NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The structure of the sentences I highlighted need to be reworded in order to avoid copyright violation and to make sure all the facts used are correct. However, the faults here are minor and shouldn't be too difficult to rectify. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1758817 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:08, 3 January 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Some of the wording is to close to the way it was written in the sources i.e. "engaging in sexual activity" and "left the image on his computer". I was also concerned about how close some extracts in this article were to the original sources, for example "Bartley Sorensen, a 63-year-old former Roman Catholic priest", "who had been trained on how to identify predators" and "he wanted to be caught". Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Although the York Daily Record reported the judge noting one sadomasochistic image, the sources never reported the judge saying "some of the images contained sadomasochistic elements". Also, saying "5,000 downloaded images of young boys" suggests all the images were of young boys, which was never really confirmed by the sources. NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The structure of the sentences I highlighted need to be reworded in order to avoid copyright violation and to make sure all the facts used are correct. However, the faults here are minor and shouldn't be too difficult to rectify. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1759035 [Passed]

Revision 1759035 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:43, 3 January 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1759035 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:43, 3 January 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.