Talk:Pandermalis announces 2007 Acropolis Museum opening
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Anonymous101 in topic Category:Archaeology
Lead Paragraph edit
The lead paragraph is rather confusing, and seems to be one long run on sentence. Any way it could be pared down to make more sense? I'm not sure what it is trying to say, so I don't want to murder it by modifying it. Lyellin 04:00, 23 March 2006 (UTC)
Is this better? I hope so :) Zorba 04:38, 23 March 2006 (UTC)
- The title is much better - but the introduction paragraph on the article is one sentence, which I think could be two or three. Is it referencing a speech the president made? I don't know what "the Information" is. THat's my concern. THe articles great, just the first line is confusing. Lyellin 04:45, 23 March 2006 (UTC)
Now, it's ok i guess. Thanks for your interest indeed. Zorba 04:52, 23 March 2006 (UTC)
- No problem - I also just slightly reworded the second sentence. Nice article! Lyellin 05:00, 23 March 2006 (UTC)
Category:Archaeology edit
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Request to add
(a subgroup of Science and Technology) to the article's categories. Sumerophile (talk) 15:02, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
Done Anonymous101 :)15:22, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
