Talk:Palestinian state set to be abandoned, says Erekat
Review of revision 907494 [Failed]
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Revision 907494 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:11, 4 November 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: This is an oft-done error on Wikinews. It may be overlooked on Wikipedia, but an encyclopedia is not in competition with Reuters. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 907494 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:11, 4 November 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: This is an oft-done error on Wikinews. It may be overlooked on Wikipedia, but an encyclopedia is not in competition with Reuters. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
- I've changed the lead a bit... any suggestion will be helpful. Pmlineditor ∞ 17:20, 4 November 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks. I'll take a look and if OK re-review. --Brian McNeil / talk 17:28, 4 November 2009 (UTC)
Review of revision 907505 [Passed]
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Revision 907505 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:34, 4 November 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: some minor c/e needed on revised lede - please check changes made The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 907505 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:34, 4 November 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: some minor c/e needed on revised lede - please check changes made The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |