Talk:Over 100 people die in stampede at Hindu temple near Jodhpur, India

Lede is misleading, scores, or 113 are not 'hundreds'. Since this also impacts the title I'd like a rewrite of the lede and suggested new title before review occurs. --Brian McNeil / ^talk 08:46, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

Review

bad work by User:Azamishaque

Revision 1 of this article has been reviewed by [[User:|]] ([[User talk:|talk]] · contribs) and found not ready at 08:56, 30 September 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Total copyright from various news websites Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: Please re-write and keep in mind that Wikinews doesnt accept Copyright edits Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1 of this article has been reviewed by [[User:|]] ([[User talk:|talk]] · contribs) and found not ready at 08:56, 30 September 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Total copyright from various news websites Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: Please re-write and keep in mind that Wikinews doesnt accept Copyright edits Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

• The revid parameter is the actual version from history reviewed, not a sequential number.
• reviews from IPs generally carry little weight - please register or log in.
• If there are copyvios they should be explicitly detailed, outside the template.

--Brian McNeil / ^talk 09:00, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

Review 2

Revision 702481 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:31, 30 September 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 17:31, 30 September 2008 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 702481 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:31, 30 September 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 17:31, 30 September 2008 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.