Talk:Northern lights may appear across Canada and northern U.S. late Tuesday night
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Revision 1071051 of this article has been reviewed by InfantGorilla (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:39, 3 August 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Nicely balanced. Shame the sun rises so early in August. I can't think of a better title, but I wonder if you can sharpen the news value of the headline a bit. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1071051 of this article has been reviewed by InfantGorilla (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:39, 3 August 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Nicely balanced. Shame the sun rises so early in August. I can't think of a better title, but I wonder if you can sharpen the news value of the headline a bit. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Title ideas? edit
This title barely meets Wikinews usual standards, as we aim to identify a unique news event when we can. (Wikinews has been around for nearly 300 Tuesdays, and a lot of chances to see the aurora.)
I would like to write something like Best chance for northern lights in three years. However, I know little about aurora forecasting, so I don't know if that headline is true.
Ideas?
--InfantGorilla (talk) 04:55, 4 August 2010 (UTC)
- Northern lights appear clearest for the first time three years, perhaps? —Mikemoral♪♫ 04:57, 4 August 2010 (UTC)
- Yes, sounds good, but is it three, or two, or four? The article and the sources are vague, so some expert help in digging up a suitable source for a more newsy headline would be great. We only have 6 hours before the article is expected to remain stable. --InfantGorilla (talk)