Talk:Mirror's exposé prompts call for inquiry into child abuse ring in Telford, England
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Revision 4389951 of this article has been reviewed by Green Giant (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:27, 13 March 2018 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Made a few copyedits, moved the Mirror source up, tweaked a few words e.g. local council is not a city council, the convicted men are of South Asian origin not extraction (a sensitive issue), but generally well written with good sources. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4389951 of this article has been reviewed by Green Giant (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:27, 13 March 2018 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Made a few copyedits, moved the Mirror source up, tweaked a few words e.g. local council is not a city council, the convicted men are of South Asian origin not extraction (a sensitive issue), but generally well written with good sources. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |