Talk:Man killed over Halloween hat in London, England

Review of revision 906633 [Passed]

Revision 906633 of this article has been reviewed by The New Mikemoral (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:00, 3 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Made a few copyedits. --The New Mikemoral ♪♫ 00:00, 3 November 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 906633 of this article has been reviewed by The New Mikemoral (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:00, 3 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Made a few copyedits. --The New Mikemoral ♪♫ 00:00, 3 November 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

"A man was what? to death"? First review? It's not a rubber stamp - fix grammar, spelling, look for errors like this first. --Brian McNeil / ^talk 00:04, 3 November 2009 (UTC)

Fixed. Tempodivalse [talk] 00:07, 3 November 2009 (UTC)

Ack, sorry, I changed the verb from "has been beaten" to "was [beaten]," but only typed half of it. My mistake, not the author's. --The New Mikemoral ♪♫ 00:28, 3 November 2009 (UTC)