Talk:Man commits suicide by jumping from Burj Khalifa

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"His death would be the first"

Unless it is doubted this is a suicide, it IS the first. If there is doubt, you should say it was presumed he leapt down himself. The verb doesn't fit the rest of the article. --194.60.106.38 (talk) 10:54, 12 May 2011 (UTC)