Talk:Man arrested in Mississippi over Internet assassination threats against Barack Obama
I CREATED this dire news article, the third after 2 dire attempts in 2008 amid dire fears since JFK was gunned down. Please help me in style for publications of this. Cheers.--Florentino Floro (talk) 07:29, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
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Revision 753458 of this article has been reviewed by Gopher65 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:21, 17 January 2009 (UTC).
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I passed this article, but I'm curious about this source. There is no specific information there that I could find, nor does it seem to be needed in the article (everything appeared to be sourced). I've left it in for now, but could you please either make the link more specific (link to specific information instead of just a general sight), or remove it? Thanks:). Gopher65talk 18:21, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
Definitely, I deeply understand reviewers will have to take hours to review my articles due to tons of sources
editThanks for your PATIENCE. If you notice these days, many of my created news articles veer on the encyclopedic BUT I dare to say not. I should be satisfied for a quickie short news style. But I opt to write deeply within the gray area of encyclopedic news without violating the style guide.
- Why? Many of news reader do not have time to open blue links, unless they need to have knowledge of technical words like Hamas, Ghana and unknown stuffs. So, I would blue link at least the names and places. Now, as I write a breaking news, the next day, tons of other updates would come in. So, I could not erase some duplicates which do have some critical facts not included in the duplicates. I had experienced failed reviews in hard articles due to LACK OF BACKUPs. So, this is the DILEMMA.
- THEN, with encyclopedic related past events and places. "Christopher appeared Friday afternoon before U.S. Magistrate Judge James C. Sumner of the United States Court of Appeals for the Fifth Circuit, located at the John Minor Wisdom U.S. Courthouse in New Orleans, Louisiana. The judge at the hearing asked Christopher if he suffered any mental illness or was prescribed any medication. "There is nothing wrong with my mind," Christopher replied." I want to justify the IMAGE I uploaded - the Courthouse. You know, Federal Court in USA are very very complex and cluttered or a mess for us editors and even Wiki Encyclopedia editors. Example, in William W. Bedsworth which I created I had a homily there.[1] So, may I just ask your patience, hard work, and some more PAIN in reviewing my long articles. It is worth it, though. PLEASE revise, modify, trim, delete or even cut off some parts or sources which you deem see to be out of style or without backup. I am just a creator and had spent more times to create very good articles. A final note. Many speed readers who are familiar with the written article would have a better look at the news if it is rather long than short with many blue links. Cheers.--Florentino Floro (talk) 05:36, 18 January 2009 (UTC)