Talk:Major snow disruption in Britain; Wikinews reports from affected village
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editEverything in the video is OR, except for the part where I talk about other areas of the UK, where these sources are used:
[1]: "Heathrow and Gatwick airports were both forced to close their runways."
[2]: "Roads, railways and airports have been affected in Northern Ireland, Wales, Scotland and England."
[3]: "Airports have been affected in Germany, France and Italy."
[4]: "Hundreds of drivers were stranded overnight on the M6 motorway in Manchester after a lorry jackknifed in the snow."
The Highways Agency quote came from a spokesperson speaking on Radio 5 Live, the Lindsay Dovay quote was taken from [5]
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Revision 1147501 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:49, 19 December 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: While it's clear the snow lead to the disruption, I've done some careful phrasing. As the Canadians and Amerikans quoted by one passenger in the sources say, this much snow should not be causing any problem and if we directly blame the snow, we inadvertently introduce a POV by ignoring the suggestions of government, council and airport authority incompetence. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1147501 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:49, 19 December 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: While it's clear the snow lead to the disruption, I've done some careful phrasing. As the Canadians and Amerikans quoted by one passenger in the sources say, this much snow should not be causing any problem and if we directly blame the snow, we inadvertently introduce a POV by ignoring the suggestions of government, council and airport authority incompetence. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |