Talk:Lost tomb of 'Gladiator' real life Roman inspiration found
Latest comment: 16 years ago by PatrickFlaherty
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Revision 711679 of this article has been reviewed by PatrickFlaherty (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:47, 17 October 2008 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Interesting article The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
After looking over the article, I have some comments (note: I'm seperate from reviewer up above)
- its unclear from the bbc article if they mean a row of columns that go on for 15m, or a 15m wide column. (although a 15m - 49.2 ft wide column is huge).
- headline and second last paragraph are slightly confusingly worded, but i can't think of anything better so i can't complain.
- I think the BBC is referring to width but it is a bit confusing.--PatrickFlaherty (talk) 22:09, 17 October 2008 (UTC)