Talk:Los Angeles commuter train collides with freight train; over two dozen killed

The closing paragraph needs tightened. Both cars and trains are vehicles. --Brian McNeil / ^talk 15:01, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

I don't have any problem with my later article being merged with this one, as has been suggested. I steered clear of quoting the Times or other news media sources as I didn't want to submit copyrighted work. Whichever article goes up could benefit from links to the Wikipedia articles on Metrolink and Amtrak, etc., but I'm not familiar enough yet with Wikinews to know how to link back to Wikipedia. (I'm a Wikipedia editor, new to Wikinews.) - Elmarco (talk) 15:58, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

You may copy the quotes themselves, but not the content afterwords. "I love art," said painter Potter, should be changed to "I love art," Potter told the BBC, or Potter said in a e-mail to the BBC. —Calebrw (talk) 16:18, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

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Revision 692004 of this article has been reviewed by Calebrw (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:16, 13 September 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Looks good. Needs quotes The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.