Talk:Loneliness unhealthy as smoking and alcoholism, new study says

Review of revision 1067585 [Failed]

Revision 1067585 of this article has been reviewed by Amgine (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 07:08, 29 July 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: English fail. Comments by reviewer: The lede is poorly written and *wrong*, according to sources. More than, not more then. Same outcome, not the same effect (and it's effect, not affect.) I haven't enough room in this text field to more than begin to list the number of errors. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1067585 of this article has been reviewed by Amgine (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 07:08, 29 July 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: English fail. Comments by reviewer: The lede is poorly written and *wrong*, according to sources. More than, not more then. Same outcome, not the same effect (and it's effect, not affect.) I haven't enough room in this text field to more than begin to list the number of errors. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1067874 [Passed]

Revision 1067874 of this article has been reviewed by HJ Mitchell (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:13, 29 July 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1067874 of this article has been reviewed by HJ Mitchell (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:13, 29 July 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.