Talk:Lockdown at Missouri university lifted as police apprehend suspected gunman

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Is confused, strange and overly long. Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 19:19, 12 May 2011 (UTC)

Reworded, how about this? —fetch·comms 20:28, 12 May 2011 (UTC)

Vastly improved, ty :) Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 20:29, 12 May 2011 (UTC)

Now just looking for a review >.> —fetch·comms 20:36, 12 May 2011 (UTC)

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