Talk:Lewis Hamilton wins 2009 Singapore Grand Prix

Review of revision 888126 [Passed]

Revision 888126 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:07, 28 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The coverage of F1 is really good for someone who is obviously not a native English speaker. However, a repeat problem with these articles is over-wikification. A particular 'pet hate' of mine is linking within the body of the article to previous Wikinews articles. I think this is inappropriate and far better served with the related news section. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 888126 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:07, 28 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The coverage of F1 is really good for someone who is obviously not a native English speaker. However, a repeat problem with these articles is over-wikification. A particular 'pet hate' of mine is linking within the body of the article to previous Wikinews articles. I think this is inappropriate and far better served with the related news section. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.