Talk:Kosmala's 2012 Games inclusion highlights Australian Paralympians' longevity
Research involved determining how many Paralympic Games a number of selected Paralympic athletes had attended. I also looked at those athletes that competed in several events extending their careers. A comparison was made with Australian Olympic athletes attending the London games. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Aussiesportlibrarian (talk • contribs)
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Revision 1523894 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:03, 8 June 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: This is great as a synthesis piece. It combines a good amount of 'trivia' to make an interesting read - even for someone as sports-disinterested as myself. Yes, it's worth looking at all the copyedit work, largely to bring the article in-line with the WN:SG and use active voice where practical. If only every first Wikinews article was as well-put together as this. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1523894 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:03, 8 June 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: This is great as a synthesis piece. It combines a good amount of 'trivia' to make an interesting read - even for someone as sports-disinterested as myself. Yes, it's worth looking at all the copyedit work, largely to bring the article in-line with the WN:SG and use active voice where practical. If only every first Wikinews article was as well-put together as this. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |