Talk:Kentucky lawmaker in critical condition after fight in high school cafeteria

Review of revision 1213654 [Failed]

Revision 1213654 of this article has been reviewed by Phearson (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 20:45, 15 April 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1213654 of this article has been reviewed by Phearson (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 20:45, 15 April 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Please review WN:STYLE for more information. Other reviewers, feel free to re-review if you disagree with my assessment, as this is my first article that I have reviewed. Phearson (talk) 20:47, 15 April 2011 (UTC)

Issues

You did not say what was wrong with the style. I cannot fix the problem if you don't tell me what it is. Tadpole256 (talk) 21:11, 15 April 2011 (UTC)

Review of revision 1214828 [Passed]

Revision 1214828 of this article has been reviewed by Phearson (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:45, 16 April 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1214828 of this article has been reviewed by Phearson (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:45, 16 April 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

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Just aknowledging that I have used the text and sources from this story to update the Wikipedia Dewayne Bunch article, as per this edit. Usually it's the other way around. Credit given on talk page amd Edit summary there - 220.101 talk^\Contribs 10:47, 17 April 2011 (UTC)