Talk:Jetstar to offer iPads as an in-flight entertainment option

Review of revision 1034636 [Failed]

Revision 1034636 of this article has been reviewed by Microchip08 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:02, 1 June 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Some sentences do not make sense; no categories; more commas required Comments by reviewer: Apologies for not copyediting the article myself. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1034636 of this article has been reviewed by Microchip08 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:02, 1 June 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Some sentences do not make sense; no categories; more commas required Comments by reviewer: Apologies for not copyediting the article myself. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Thanks for the quick review. It has obviously been way too long since I last wrote an article, since I completely forgot about categories. I think I have everything that may have not made sense reworded (and added more commas), though if there is anything else, I am going to need a few more hints since everything made sense to me :). --Cspurrier (talk) 23:18, 1 June 2010 (UTC)

Review of revision 1034674 [Failed]

Revision 1034674 of this article has been reviewed by Griffinofwales (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:29, 2 June 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: parts of the articles are unsourced NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1034674 of this article has been reviewed by Griffinofwales (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:29, 2 June 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: parts of the articles are unsourced NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

The part about Bluebox providing the services to Jetstar appears to not be sourced, and there are two conflicting prices, both of which don't provide currencies. Please fix. Griffinofwales (talk) 01:31, 2 June 2010 (UTC)

I added a source that fixes the Bluebox thing, it was implied by the Crave article, but it whould have been clearer. The prices issue is because the AU papers are assuming AUD, while the HI paper is in USD (10AUD is ~= 8.50USD). The last source I added lists it with a currency. --Cspurrier (talk) 02:28, 2 June 2010 (UTC)

Review of revision 1034918 [Passed]

Revision 1034918 of this article has been reviewed by Griffinofwales (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:32, 2 June 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1034918 of this article has been reviewed by Griffinofwales (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:32, 2 June 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.