Talk:Israeli shelling on UN school on the Gaza Strip kills six
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Comments by reviewer: TMuch of the third paragraph has now actual sources, but the related new section has it all in so I guess it's OK The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 753318 of this article has been reviewed by Anonymous101 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 09:46, 17 January 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: TMuch of the third paragraph has now actual sources, but the related new section has it all in so I guess it's OK The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Needs a Picture
editA picture is a million word worth... thank you —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 79.173.248.248 (talk • contribs)
"Words"
editThere is a trend in the stories related to Op. Cast Lead and some others to overuse and misuse quotes for things other than direct quotations. Is this supposed to be a tabloid instead of a news organization? 72.154.55.98 18:32, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- No, that's just bad grammar. Quotes should not be used as a cloak for weasel words, or as an attempt to place additional accenting on a word or phrase. Please feel free to correct the misuse of quotes, as you did in this article. Gopher65talk 18:52, 17 January 2009 (UTC)