Talk:Israel declines appeals to sign Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty
Review of revision 1031687 [Passed]
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Revision 1031687 of this article has been reviewed by Diego Grez (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:15, 30 May 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: LAST VICTIM OF THE ARTICLES FOR REVIEW MURDER! Good article after all :) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1031687 of this article has been reviewed by Diego Grez (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:15, 30 May 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: LAST VICTIM OF THE ARTICLES FOR REVIEW MURDER! Good article after all :) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
The word "spurns" in the title has negative connotations implying disdainful rejection or contemptuous treatment (cf. Webster's dictionary) and this both detracts from the otherwise neutral wording of the content and is simply wrong - the article itself presents reasons that are neither disdainful or contemptuous. The word spurns should be replaced with a more accurate, less emotional and POV word here such as "rejects". PopularMax (talk) 03:26, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
- Decline sounds better.
Done --Diego Grez return fire 03:29, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
