Talk:Hundreds feared dead after Indian ferry boat capsizes
Review of revision 1486967 [Not ready]
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Revision 1486967 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:56, 1 May 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I'm being a bit of a stickler on the copyright vios, but we have to be careful here. From about the 2nd paragraph down, be careful with quotes from the main sources....you're cutting it a little bit thin. It's almost there! Good work on NPOV too!! ....and an important event for Wikinews. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1486967 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:56, 1 May 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I'm being a bit of a stickler on the copyright vios, but we have to be careful here. From about the 2nd paragraph down, be careful with quotes from the main sources....you're cutting it a little bit thin. It's almost there! Good work on NPOV too!! ....and an important event for Wikinews. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Review of revision 1487618 [Passed]
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Revision 1487618 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:24, 2 May 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Great improvements! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1487618 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:24, 2 May 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Great improvements! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |