Talk:Gunmen with rocket-launchers massacre 60 at market in Mahmoudiya, Iraq
rocket launchers
editthe rocket-launchers do not appear to be particularly significant, to be highlighted in the title. or am i missing something? Doldrums 18:18, 17 July 2006 (UTC)
- also, it's "wielding". Doldrums 18:22, 17 July 2006 (UTC)
I take it you were 82.141.51.151 - user edited a couple of minutes before you, and I often edit before I've logged in without realising it. I've edited. I think the rocket-launchers gives an idea of the scale and brutality of the attack. Ealturner 00:36, 18 July 2006 (UTC)
- nope, am not 82.141..., think i'm a hemisphere away. Doldrums 03:37, 18 July 2006 (UTC)
"Gunmen with rocket-launchers massacre 60 at market in Mahmoudiya, Iraq" I'm republishing with this. I think it is less sensationalist, more observational. Good criticisms. Apology if you think I'm going too far publishing this now but you have not made any other comments and nor has anyone else. Ealturner 00:36, 18 July 2006 (UTC)
- Okay, just seen you move it to develop. Will give it more time. Ealturner 00:44, 18 July 2006 (UTC)
- "I think it is less sensationalist, more observational." <- one word "LOL!". This article is so horrible, that it should be saved somewhere as a bad example. It is full of hate-speech, spelling errors, POV and rethoric. I dont think theres anything to discuss - every idiot with a bit of brain would immediatelly notice that this is plain and simply propaganda.
Please leave your ID with ~ four wiggle lines. Welcome to wikinews, it's good to have your input in this discussion.Ealturner 10:40, 18 July 2006 (UTC)
I dont think theres anything to discuss - every idiot with a bit of brain would immediatelly notice that this is plain and simply propaganda
Can you highlight the offending passages? I am more than willing to edit. I don't want any " hate-speech, spelling errors, POV and rethoric". Ealturner 10:40, 18 July 2006 (UTC)
Everything has been Attributed, it is all Sourced and Revelant. All the specific objections that were rasied have been both answered and dealt with (title was changed). Republishing. Ealturner 11:34, 18 July 2006 (UTC)