Talk:Group claims Fred Thompson lobbied for abortion-rights, Thompson denies
Latest comment: 16 years ago by Jcart1534 in topic Issues for cleanup
Issues for cleanup edit
C56C, there are just a few issues that need to be addressed.
- Try to avoid sources that are opinion blogs (the link for Chicago Tribune and LA Times). You should use the actual article for these. For instance, the LA Times article found [here] would be better. Their reporter, Michael Finnegan, apparently broke the story.
- I haven't checked all of your text, but this part: "said it was 'absolutely bizarre' for Thompson to deny that he lobbied against the abortion counseling rule" is a direct cut and paste.
- You should try to incorporate a bit more balance such as Thompson's voting record on abortion-related bills etc.
Other than that, it looks good. Jcart1534 23:21, 7 July 2007 (UTC)