Talk:Face coverings to be mandatory on public transport in England from June 15, transport secretary declares
Headline
editConsidering WN:Future, the headline should say "Face coverings to be mandatory on public transport in England from June 15, John Doe declares".
•–• 18:55, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
- Noted and changed. Thank you for the advice. Chandlerjoeyross (talk)
Lede
editThe first sentence of the lede also violates WN:Future, reporting as fact a future event. The focal event is an announcement, which as currently written isn't mentioned until the second sentence. Not only is it much stronger to put the focal event first, but in this case, the future event mentioned in the first sentence calls for attribution, and the attribution is the focal event that's now in the second sentence. --Pi zero (talk) 14:02, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
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Comments by reviewer:
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |