Talk:Face coverings to be mandatory on public transport in England from June 15, transport secretary declares

Headline

Considering WN:Future, the headline should say "Face coverings to be mandatory on public transport in England from June 15, John Doe declares".
•–• 18:55, 4 June 2020 (UTC)

Noted and changed. Thank you for the advice. Chandlerjoeyross (talk)

Lede

The first sentence of the lede also violates WN:Future, reporting as fact a future event. The focal event is an announcement, which as currently written isn't mentioned until the second sentence. Not only is it much stronger to put the focal event first, but in this case, the future event mentioned in the first sentence calls for attribution, and the attribution is the focal event that's now in the second sentence. --Pi zero (talk) 14:02, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

Review of revision 4568376 [Passed]

Revision 4568376 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:32, 5 June 2020 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: There were several repairs to apply re WN:Future. Also, there were several passages too close to source, and one direct quote that seems to have been quoting one of the news sources. (As always, of course, see the detailed revision history for details and other things that came up during review). The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4568376 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:32, 5 June 2020 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: There were several repairs to apply re WN:Future. Also, there were several passages too close to source, and one direct quote that seems to have been quoting one of the news sources. (As always, of course, see the detailed revision history for details and other things that came up during review). The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.