Talk:Existing US home sales fall 9.6% in February

Review of revision 1199299 [Failed]

Revision 1199299 of this article has been reviewed by Mono (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:08, 21 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: See below. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: I found several copyright issues, where words were copied from the sources. Please rewrite those areas in your own words. After finding the examples below, I stopped reviewing the article -- please take a look at the whole article and make changes as necessary. "...prices fell to the lowest level in nearly nine years..." mirrors WSJ's "...prices fell to the lowest level in nearly nine years..." "in a sign that the U.S. housing market remains depressed" is too similar to WSJ's "indications that the market remains depressed" "These figures were worse than economists had expected" is too close to CNN's "The report was worse than economists had expected" Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1199299 of this article has been reviewed by Mono (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:08, 21 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: See below. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: I found several copyright issues, where words were copied from the sources. Please rewrite those areas in your own words. After finding the examples below, I stopped reviewing the article -- please take a look at the whole article and make changes as necessary. "...prices fell to the lowest level in nearly nine years..." mirrors WSJ's "...prices fell to the lowest level in nearly nine years..." "in a sign that the U.S. housing market remains depressed" is too similar to WSJ's "indications that the market remains depressed" "These figures were worse than economists had expected" is too close to CNN's "The report was worse than economists had expected" Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1199402 [Passed]

Revision 1199402 of this article has been reviewed by Tempodivalse (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:42, 21 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I was tempted to fail again on copyvio, but after closer examination decided it was okay. Some parts or the article employ a similar sentence structure to the sources, but overall I think it's different enough to be acceptable. There are only so many ways to phrase a short sentence. -Tempodivalse [talk] 21:42, 21 March 2011 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1199402 of this article has been reviewed by Tempodivalse (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:42, 21 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I was tempted to fail again on copyvio, but after closer examination decided it was okay. Some parts or the article employ a similar sentence structure to the sources, but overall I think it's different enough to be acceptable. There are only so many ways to phrase a short sentence. -Tempodivalse [talk] 21:42, 21 March 2011 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.