Talk:Drug, alcohol, tobacco abuse rising among California teens

Latest comment: 18 years ago by Gumboyaya in topic wording?

It is interesting to note that California has some of the strictest laws concerning drugs, alcohol, and tobacco:

  • It has its own mini Controlled Substances Act.
  • It has its own drug analog act, going into detail about what is classified as a controlled substance analog.
  • Ninety-five percent Ethanol cannot be purchased unless it is denatured.
  • The spores of various mushroom strains are illegal to have, although every other state except GA has no such restrictions.
  • No one is allowed to smoke in any building

Good article, I'm glad you brought that up. Andresv 00:19, 28 April 2006 (UTC)Reply

Grugs and achol sigeets takin in by american kidz

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Copyright/licensing

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This article is copied verbatim from the James Logan Courier, a student newspaper. There is no copyright statement or license covering re-use on the website of the paper. I have written the address listed on the website asking for clarification on their terms for re-use. --Chiacomo (talk) 02:01, 28 April 2006 (UTC)Reply

I have received an email from the author specifically releasing this article to Wikinews under CC-BY (with attribution to Wikinews). --Chiacomo (talk) 15:36, 1 May 2006 (UTC)Reply
It seems reasonable to publish this story then. I've even made it the second lead. Karen ratio

wording?

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Whilst reading this article, I "stumbled" across the following sentence: "Those who had used marijuana in the past year rose from 14.11 percent of 14.6 percent over the period."

Help a non-native speaker, and tell me, whether the part "... 14.11 p. of 14.6 p. ..." is properly formulated concerning grammar. I wouldn´t have chosen such a wording, but as I mentioned, I´m not a native speaker of English. Thanks Gumboyaya 08:52, 3 May 2006 (UTC)Reply

I believe "to" is the word to go with here. --Deprifry|+T+ 08:55, 3 May 2006 (UTC)Reply


Yip, quite obvious actually, but I read and reread, and could only figure out, that the sentence didn´t "taste" well.

Cheers! Gumboyaya 12:26, 3 May 2006 (UTC)Reply

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