Talk:Dow falls 340 points amid unemployment and retail sales rates news

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Revision 688698 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:28, 4 September 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Just be careful with quoting/paraphrasing please. Could use a slight bit more copyediting. Otherwise very nice work. --Cirt (talk) 22:28, 4 September 2008 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 688698 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:28, 4 September 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Just be careful with quoting/paraphrasing please. Could use a slight bit more copyediting. Otherwise very nice work. --Cirt (talk) 22:28, 4 September 2008 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Typo

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• The article says 'the The'. The first 'the' should be removed.
• 'American' in the first sentence may be linked to United States.

Van der Hoorn (talk) 14:33, 10 March 2009 (UTC)

Done ♪Tempo di Valse ♪ 02:03, 11 March 2009 (UTC)