Talk:Dalai Lama begins trip to Taiwan
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Revision 868981 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:43, 30 August 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Could be improved with more use of active voice. Remember to add people categories (and to use their local 'name' redirects such as Tenzin Gyatso. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 868981 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:43, 30 August 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Could be improved with more use of active voice. Remember to add people categories (and to use their local 'name' redirects such as Tenzin Gyatso. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |