Talk:DNA components found in meteorites
Review of revision 1270241 [Failed]
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Revision 1270241 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:17, 9 August 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: This entire article is only one paragraph. It should be at least three paragraphs. Personally, I do not approve of the term 'building blocks'. It appears to be unnecessary here. I think the title of this article will have to be changed. There is no definitive proof that these are 'life's building blocks'. One final point: What do you mean by 'carbon-rich'? I thought it read 'organic-rich' in the sources. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1270241 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:17, 9 August 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: This entire article is only one paragraph. It should be at least three paragraphs. Personally, I do not approve of the term 'building blocks'. It appears to be unnecessary here. I think the title of this article will have to be changed. There is no definitive proof that these are 'life's building blocks'. One final point: What do you mean by 'carbon-rich'? I thought it read 'organic-rich' in the sources. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
- Splitting the article up into paragraphs is very easy, and TBH you could have done it yourself. I'll go do the original author a favour by doing it now. As for the organic/carbon thing, organic molecules, by definition, are carbon-based, so anything rich in organic molecules will also be carbon-rich. DENDODGE 17:40, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
Review of revision 1270314 [Passed]
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Revision 1270314 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:37, 9 August 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1270314 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:37, 9 August 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |