Talk:College ice hockey could follow NHL and add second referee

This story is written in journalistic format. I am a professional journalist and know how to write paragraphs.

Please review our content guide. We are not a traditional news source. --MrMiscellanious (talk) – 19:52, 18 May 2006 (UTC)

Regarding paragraphs, the style guide states:

Beyond the first paragraph, try to stick to the following tips:

• use brief paragraphs - between 30 and 80 words is considered acceptable in newspaper writing

• each paragraph should be only one or two sentences (three if you use very short sentences)
• each paragraph covers a single topic only

The paragraphs in this article are about 20-30 words, so possibly slightly short, but apart from that, how does this article not conform to the style guide? - Borofkin 00:45, 19 May 2006 (UTC)