Talk:Chilean President Piñera discontinues "catastrophe state" in O'Higgins, Maule and Bío Bío regions

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Copyedit

No offence, but this should have undergone some copyediting before being published as it reads rather roughly. For instance, improper use of "on" in the title, and no clarification of what "bono marzo" means, which I'm assuming will not be understood by most anglophone readers. Please, do at least a rudimentary copyedit before publishing stories if needed. Tempodivalse [talk] 17:47, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

Very much agree. This has been published in a poor state for several hours now. I fixed some of the English, hopefully without changing the sense at all (I don't speak Spanish), but I'm afraid I can't shed any light on what "bono marzo" is. the wub "?!" 23:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

"Bono marzo" means something like "march bonus", a bonus (of money) that poor people received from the government. --Diego Grez ^{let's talk} 23:17, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

Could you perhaps clarify that in the article, then? Tempodivalse [talk] 23:21, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

Edit protected request

{{editprotected}} Please add Category:O'Higgins Region and Category:2010 Pichilemu earthquake. Thanks. --Diego Grez ^{return fire} 19:59, 22 May 2010 (UTC)

Done Benny the mascot (talk) 18:27, 26 May 2010 (UTC)