Talk:Car bomb attack in Iraqi town, at least two dead and 45 injured

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Revision 1046367 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:58, 19 June 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

No verb in title

Come on guys: there needs to be a verb in title. Also, no "and." Something like Car bomb explodes, leaving 2 dead, 45 injured in Iraqi town." Thanks, Calebrw (talk) 09:35, 19 June 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to add that this shouldn't be moved - the title isn't so bad that we ought to change it, given the mess that this creates. However, it really should have been done pre-publish. Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 09:43, 19 June 2010 (UTC)

Good points, both. :) -- Cirt (talk) 15:14, 19 June 2010 (UTC)