Talk:California campus pepper spray police suspended
Review of revision 1327023 [Not ready]
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Revision 1327023 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:34, 21 November 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Watch that passive voice! Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1327023 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:34, 21 November 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Watch that passive voice! Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Review of revision 1327027 [Passed]
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Revision 1327027 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:39, 21 November 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1327027 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:39, 21 November 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |