Talk:California Senate prohibits sports drinks in public schools

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"A girl with obesity" is an interesting caption. It almost sounds as if the obesity is like a pet, as in "A girl with a dog or a ferret". Maybe "An example of childhood obesity" would be more apropos? Turtlestack (talk) 23:48, 28 May 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, "An example of childhood obesity" sounds good. Gonna change. --Diego Grez ^{return fire} 23:51, 28 May 2010 (UTC)

Done --Diego Grez ^{return fire} 23:52, 28 May 2010 (UTC)