Talk:British Airways and Iberia agree to merge

Review of revision 911512 [Failed]

Revision 911512 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:51, 12 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: n/r Newsworthiness: Not ready: Who is Iberia? Not once in the article is it stated what BA or Iberia is Verifiability: Not ready: n/r NPOV: Not ready: n/r Style: Not ready: n/r Comments by reviewer: What is a "flag carrier"? which I'm not even sure what that is, other that something that would hold up a w:Flag. Why not make the intro paragraph a little clearer to those who aren't intimately familiar with the aviation industry? Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 911512 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:51, 12 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: n/r Newsworthiness: Not ready: Who is Iberia? Not once in the article is it stated what BA or Iberia is Verifiability: Not ready: n/r NPOV: Not ready: n/r Style: Not ready: n/r Comments by reviewer: What is a "flag carrier"? which I'm not even sure what that is, other that something that would hold up a w:Flag. Why not make the intro paragraph a little clearer to those who aren't intimately familiar with the aviation industry? Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

I'm going to object to the 'what are BA/Iberia' bit. Not only are BA one of the most well-known airlines, but at any rate a firm with the word 'Airways' in its name might very well be an airline. A firm with 'British' in its name might very well be British. Iberia, since they are merging, might just be a company likely to merge with an airline. That would be an airline.

As for flag carrier thing, that can be fixed with a simple link. That I'll fix. I guess it's a term I've become too used to using here; I'd normally have linked it to start with. Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 00:23, 13 November 2009 (UTC)

Review of revision 911694 [Passed]

Revision 911694 of this article has been reviewed by The wub (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:41, 13 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: This is clearer now. Flag carrier is linked, and I moved it to later in the article to avoid overwhelming the reader with links, along with a few minor tweaks. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 911694 of this article has been reviewed by The wub (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:41, 13 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: This is clearer now. Flag carrier is linked, and I moved it to later in the article to avoid overwhelming the reader with links, along with a few minor tweaks. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.