Talk:Brazilian surfer wins world championship in Pichilemu, Chile

{{editprotected}} The news story's lead paragraph is written wrong in relation to the title "Brazilian surfer wins world championship". It doesn't even mention the name of the Brazilian who won the surfing competition! Either change the title to something more appropriate like "World surf championship held in [x=place name]" or rewrite the first paragraph to indicate who won the championship, something like "Marcos Monteiro, a [x=adjective] Brazilian, won this year's [x=noun]."

• Not done as such would be a major breach of WN:ARCHIVE. Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 22:58, 4 July 2011 (UTC)
• No, it won't be a major breach. You can rewrite the first paragraph simply by putting in the name of the Brazilian who is supposed to have won the championship. This is a matter of style not substance, since the name of the said person appears later in the article anyway. Please see the following exceptions described in Archive conventions: Post-archival edits:

After an article has been protected, it should no longer be edited on elements of content, sources, or other substance. It should be edited for non-content issues (such as spelling, typos, punctuation and so forth) on a case-by-case basis. Questions of grammar are prone to dispute, and should be implemented after consensus on the talk page.

• Okay, I'm sorry, I didn't realise you didn't think titles and first paragraphs were content. Forgive me. Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 01:36, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

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I was present for the first few hours of the championship, and took some photographs. I couldn't get accreditation because I was too late, otherwise I could have got more information! Otherwise, this should be fine. アンパロ ^{Io ti odio!} 03:14, 29 May 2011 (UTC)

• Part of the information used to describe the "reunion of the Mayor with representatitves of the ceremonial" was taken from here, supposed to be a "press release". アンパロ ^{Io ti odio!} 21:43, 29 May 2011 (UTC)

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